Some people feel that the cost of space exploration is far too high for the benefits it brings while others argue that space programs should continue no matter what the cost. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
After finding the
evidences
of water from the mars Change the wording
evidence
pieces of evidence
shreds of evidence
people
have become more curious about the space
and universe. Even, people
thinks
that Change the verb form
think
the
Correct article usage
apply
space
programs should continue to explore more about the universe but on the other side, few people
suggests
that the budget of Change the verb form
suggest
space
exploration is too high instead
of it the same budget can be use
for different projects. To my way of thinking, I feel there are Change the verb form
be used
lot
of things which need to be Change the article
a lot
explore
about the Wrong verb form
explored
space
and it should be continue
at any cost.
Some demerits which Change the verb form
be continued
people
argues
, that exploring Change the verb form
argue
space
is not only expensive but also
at a
same Change the article
the
time
it is risky. Astronauts might Add a comma
,time
lost
in Change the verb form
lose
be lost
the
Correct article usage
apply
space
, get crash while landing, might Add a missing verb
have accident
accident
with meteors. Fix the agreement mistake
accidents
For instance
, in 2002 NASA's spaceship named Apollo 2 mission was to land Astronauts from the space
center
outside the earth, But something happened with the spaceship when they were at Change the spelling
centre
atmosphere
of the earth. And Add an article
the atmosphere
an atmosphere
Spacecarft
crashed on the atmosphere itself, and because of that 8 astronauts died. Correct your spelling
Spacecraft
In addition
, to make that space
shuttle it
cost around 500 million dollars which Correct pronoun usage
apply
was
Change the verb form
were
preety
high at that time. Correct your spelling
pretty
At
the end, Change the preposition
In
this
point makes the people
put their point strong on the disbelief of the space
programs.
On the other side, few people
still supports
Change the verb form
support
the
Correct article usage
apply
space
programs by explaining the recent success of space
exploration which help to understand more about the solar system. One of the recent example
was India's Change to a plural noun
examples
space
organization named ISRO who launched the satellite called Chandrayaan. The mission of Chandryaan was to find the water particles on the moon with the help of laser scan EOS 2341 technology. Eventually
they got succeded to find the water particles on the moon. Add a comma
,Eventually
Also
, they found out the old river passage, from which it was concluded that there might be a river in the moon.
In the conclusion, Space
exploration is need
for Change the verb form
is needed
betterment
of the mankind. Not only it will help us to find the new Add an article
the betterment
possiblities
to settle Correct your spelling
possibilities
in
other planets Change preposition
on
such
as Mars or Neptune,
it will Add the word(s)
but,
also
help to
understand Correct pronoun usage
us to
about
the creation of the earth.Change preposition
apply
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