Q. Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Today people have different perspectives and think that a proper university

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is important in getting a respective job, I agree. While others believe that getting good work experience and developing practical

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is more crucial these days. In

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essay,I will discuss both views and give the necessary opinion. On the one hand, people who have knowledge about the subject and

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a

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in the university are more confident and have

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positive behaviour in the workplace.

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as, a masters

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or equivalent education is compulsory for

a better employment positions

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.

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,

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learning experience gives a

person

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leadership qualities and professional

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.

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, companies are

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selecting candidates who have a proper educational background.

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,for the position of manager men or women who are applying for job roles need a qualification in masters

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management.

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,

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learning aspect helps applicants and organisations to achieve desired goals and helps in the improvisation of designated roles.

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,In dealing with customers of particular companies,clients always prefer candidates with proper communication and working

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reason, the public desire to continue education

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to practical development. From other people's perspectives,career plays an important place as they think that knowledge always give benefits in the job prospect.

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, the

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who is hired in a company needs specific goals and soft

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, as

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is one of the objectives of an organisation.

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,if a

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is not meeting the requirements of a firm, there can be adverse effects on the company's reputation and partners of the company. For

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reason, most of them prefer candidates who are having a

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2 to 3 years of experience in a particular field of employment. In conclusion,To give my opinion,completing a

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with soft

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always give benefits for both

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person

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and hired organisation and build confidence.