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you have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centers in your country all look very similar to each other. you don't fully agree with this opinion. say which points in the article you agree with explain ways in which your town center is different from most other town centers offer to give guided tour of your twon to the writer of the article

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Dear sir or madam, I am writing to express my disagreement with the article published on September 20th in National Newspaper on the topic of town centres in Iran. It is true that the infrastructure of the cities in my country is almost the same.
For example
, urban designers have followed the same street construction style in all cities which has made them alike when someone walks or drives in their streets. In terms of facilities
such
 as hospitals and high-ranked universities ,fortunately, many towns possess an acceptable standard that provides welfare for their citizens.
However
, when it comes to my town Isfahan, I contend that
this
city
 is very much different regarding its architecture. Buildings in Isfahan have their unique architectural design covering their exterior parts with
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amazing tile work which has given the
city
 a mesmerizing atmosphere. Another feature that marks my
city
 as a different one is the water canals laying out through all parts of the
city
 ,which were built about 500 years ago, to prevent flooding. Since my
city
 has unique and different features that have been overlooked in
this
 article, I offer the author of
this
 article a 3-day tour around my town with me guiding you along to become more familiar with
this
city
. I look forward to your reply. Yours faithfully, Majid Izadi
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