Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter: • suggest how you could help her in her home • say why you would like to do this work • explain when you will and will not be available
Dear Mrs Barett,
I am writing
this
letter because I saw your advertisement on the internet that you want to hire a person to help you. My name is Emma, I am a student and I can do this
.
In the next
summer. I am free because I don't need to go to school and I can help you in your hour home for a few hours a day next
summer. I want to help you because you are a kind person and very helpful. So I want to do some things that can help you. I have met you before in a supermarket and you helped me to pay for items when I forgot money. So that is
why I really want to help you next
summer. I can do housework even cook for you.
I'm available to do this
. Write me back if you read this
letter.
Thank you!
Yours sincerely,
EmmaSubmitted by meomy171 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite