Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter: • suggest how you could help her in her home • say why you would like to do this work • explain when you will and will not be available

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Dear Mrs Barett, I am writing

this

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letter because I saw your advertisement on the internet that you want to hire a person to help you. My name is Emma, I am a student and I can do

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. In the

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summer. I am free because I don't need to go to school and I can help you in your hour home for a few hours a day

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summer. I want to help you because you are a kind person and very helpful. So I want to do some things that can help you. I have met you before in a supermarket and you helped me to pay for items when I forgot money. So

that is

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why I really want to help you

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summer. I can do housework even cook for you. I'm available to do

this

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. Write me back if you read

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letter. Thank you! Yours sincerely, Emma

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

154 words

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