It is more important for a building to serve its purposes to look beautiful. Architects do not need to worry about whether it is a real work of art. Do you agree or disagree?

In the day and age, the key feature of a building has never failed to provoke controversial debates among

people

. Some

people

believe that architects should take a keen consideration to the

beauty

's purposes

instead

of a real artwork for a building. While the aesthetic value is valid to some extent, I would contend that the efficient functions should be put a premium on much more than

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beauty

does. Without a shadow of

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, a stunning building can bring tremendous benefits for not only the city’s landscape but

also

for the national economic situation. Thanks to the mingling of gorgeous skyscrapers and the conventional housing, it adds more charming weight to the whole area, which can be a heritage site for

people

.

Hence

, these factors can attract a wealth of visitors and provide tourism income, which is

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main drive to an exponential thriving of

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. The Opera House can be cited as the solid instance

that is

customary for its ancient architecture and unique construction. It

also

draws an appeal of music enthusiasts to come there in order to immerse in the gorgeous and mysterious interior furniture, which contributes to the local economy. It is undeniable that aesthetic factors are one of the most imperative to the construction’s success. While the redeeming features of

beauty

are widely acknowledged, whether a building can give the proper function for the owners should be more appreciated than the former. Due to the continuous population boom,

people

have an ever-increasing demand for space to live so it is necessary for a building to meet that need and provide an adequate number of accommodations.

Moreover

, the building materials which are affordable to lower the construction cost can be applicable on a mass scale apart from just being beautiful with a view to getting access for every single life. A building

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is adopted with top-notch technologies and exorbitant materials

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Marina Bay can be useless if it can not provide a reasonable price for humans. Undisputedly, the functions of construction are of significance for contributing to the efficacious building. In conclusion,

people

should combine equally between the

beauty

and function value while still focusing on the function

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so that a building can reach its goal to bring the most

satisfied

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experience for owners in all aspects .