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we are becoming increasingly dependent on computer based technology. How do you think it will change in the future? Is it good for us to rely so much on computers?

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Using
computers
 has become a normal part of everyday life for many people. Over the recent decades
in
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 particular, computer science has been gaining popularity and as I believe will develop and progress rapidly during the
next
 several decades.
Although
 there are some disadvantages concerning
this
 trend, to my way of thinking, the positives outweigh the negatives. When computer technology has been developed, it caused significant changes in our lives. Nowadays everything is so dependant on
computers
 that if we abandoned all the achieved progress, most of the people probably would starve to death. I tend to think that the process of constant creation of innovations is unstoppable because the increasing economies in developed and developing countries are linked to the improvement in
IT
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 area.
Moreover
, some scientists believe that the only way to save our planet from the impending ecological disaster is to rely on renewable energy, which can not be used without modern technology. In years gone by, before the invention of
computers
, all the work was done using human
labor
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. To
this
 date, machines have replaced employees, and,
therefore
, companies are more interested in workers who can work with technics rather than performing simple tasks. On the one hand,
this
 caused the remarkable growth of unemployment rates and poverty.
Conversely
,
adoption
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 of the new system limits the
amount
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 of human mistakes and increases the quality of products and services. One of the biggest technological breakthroughs was achieved in the medical field.
Computers
 allowed doctors to improve diagnostics and perform more effective treatment surging the lifespan of our generation. To summarise, humanity can not turn back or stop the technological evolution, in
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 it will be going more rapidly than before. While there are some negative sides
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such
 computer dependency, in my view, there are many positives that we can focus on.
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