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Some people believe that women should be able to join their country’s army and police forces. Others think that only men should be allowed to work in these areas. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Most people expect that only specially trained
men
 are allowed to work in the
army
 industry. In the modern
army
 system, it is not dedicated only to
men
 but
also
women
 should be able to join any position in
this
 field. Indeed, a lot of female
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soldiers
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solders
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soldiers
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 contributed to World
War
 2 according to the historical data. I remember that more than 300,000
women
 worked in the U.S. aircraft industry during World
War
 2. In
case
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 of the Russian and
Germany
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war
, there were around 1,000,000
women
 who served in the Russian
army
 during the
war
. Because of these numbers, we can’t say that
army
 is dedicated only to
men
. They worked as field solder and even some worked as
an
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aircraft pilots. Of course, a lot of
women
 worked in hospitals as a nurse.
On the other hand
, a special force becoming more and more digitalized. In the 19th century,
the
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most countries fight each other by using weapons.
However
, the developed countries spent
giant
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budget
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budgets
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 on their development of
defense
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 systems. These systems required superior staff who have been completed their dedicated training.
Furthermore
, a government should consider gender
issue
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issues
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 when they
hiring
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 people in
this
 industry. In my opinion, I suppose that there is no gender requirement for
detective
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detectives
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 and digital police
officer
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officers
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 for the reason that they can implement what
men
 can do. From day to day, the work environment of the police officers becoming similar to IT staff,
therefore
, it is not essential in
case
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 of gender.
Conclusion
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, I strongly agree that
women
 can be part of their country’s
army
 and police forces.
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