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Nowadays, people move from one country to another for work. some people think children of these families suffer beacuseof this, while other thinks it is helpful for them . Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #move #country #work #children #families #beacuseof
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 nation where some people reckon that children of these types of families suffer because of
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 but others think that it has some positive impacts of
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discuss
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 in my upcoming paragraphs.
To begin
 with, in
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 people who move from one country to another nation for work but children of these families suffer from many troubles
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 of all, they cannot spend quality time with their family members which may
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 of
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 between them are weaker
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 , one cannot keep eye on them where they indulge in unethical deeds and
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also
 they do robbery , snatching just to
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 their desire s and they use drugs in their life with the absence of their parents,
as a result
 , children feel
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lonely
 ness in their life.
However
, on the other side , there are some positive impacts
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too
, the
first
 and foremost , they can easily know about other tradition or culture as well as languages
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in spite
 of
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 , if they moved to other nation where they get higher education and
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also
 they make better future without any
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restrictions
secondly
 , they do
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 job and easily
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 their desires. I believe that
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it is
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 way to know about the other tradition or culture as well as languages. To conclude ,
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no doubt
 , it is
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peaceful
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 experience for everyone but
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 the negative impacts cannot be neglected
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