Some movies are serious, designed to make the audience think. Other movies are designed primarily to amuse and entertain. Which type of movie do you prefer?

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Certain

movies

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are designed for

peoples

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to think, because of their serious genre, while other

type

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of scripted films

are

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used as

source

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of amusement and entertainment. To my choice, I always prefer to watch

movies

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which are made for the purpose of

delightment

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delighting

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rather than being serious.

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with, in present circumstances due to busy and hectic schedule and in

race

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of money one’s life has becomes so complicated that the means of entertaining ourselves has phenomenally reduced.

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the corona

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corona virus

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coronavirus

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pandemic comes in to

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restrict us to the home and lessen more opportunities

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entertainment outdoor.

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, sports activities decreased

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due to

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contagious disease outspread.

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, entertaining

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can be the prime source of relieving stress.

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entertaining

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serves

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a purpose of not relieving stress, but

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a lesson at the end of the day

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future scientific depiction.

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, as they did how robots will take over humans by 2050 in the "Transformers" movie. On contrary to

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, serious

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have failed to bring happiness

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peoples face

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a decline in viewership of these has been seen over

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last

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five years as comedy

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has

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started to form in abundance on

low

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budget with

better

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story. Sometimes a movie with a message help to extract negative thought script and criminals may get a chance to benefit of in planning their criminal activity like it

was happened

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happened

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USA

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the USA

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, a bank robbery was taken place and when the culprits interviewed they unveiled being

inspirant

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inspired

of famous series "breaking bad" in which writer had portrayed a picture of how a thief plan to

robber

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the robber

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and

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escaped unhide from the cops, while the main purpose of

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movie to highlight the positive image of police among peoples. In

conclusions

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, to

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it is a better decision to go with entertaining

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, because of combo genre of

screen plays

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screenplays

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serve both purposes

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as comedy and a

take home

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message at the same time.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.5

Complete response

7.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

334 words

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