Some people think students should study the science of food and how to prepare it. Others think that school time should be used in learning important subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Many

people

support the idea that

science

of diet and cooking subject should be in

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program in every

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. Meanwhile, there are some arguments that these

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are not necessary and,

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the student

a student

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student

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students

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should study other essential programs

such

as maths and

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basic

science

. From my point of view, food

preperation

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preparation

and

science

of ingredients subjects are important and every

pupils

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should learn. In the

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discuss

both

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of

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and personal support reasons.

First

, Some

people

think that cooking classes are for

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embarrass

student

passion which should be only for

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course

for entertaining students.

For instance

, The Bangkok Educational Organisation showed the reports that the students were enjoyed and relaxed in the diet and cooking class which they do not need any serious

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in these classes. From

this

student

report, Many

argunemts

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arguments

agree that

nutrition

course

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courses

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should be an elective

course

.

Moreover

, the pupils should study other subjects which is more essential

such

as

mathemetics

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mathematics

and

science

for daily life that upgrade their

knowladges

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knowledge

knowledges

.

However

, it is undeniable that food is a basic

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human needs

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human-needs

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human needs

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which is every

people

should learn and know about

nutrition

and cooking.

For example

, the

Nutrition

and Diet Institution has said that

people

should understand about several nutritions and

preperation

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preparation

process

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processes

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such

as what types of

nitrition

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nutrition

make their life healthier or what parts of fruit make

people

get sick that must be cut off. From

this

point of view,

cooking

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a cooking

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class is

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vital for everyone and the

course

should be in basic syllabus. In Conclusion, There are many

opinion

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that

science

of

nutrition

and cooking

course

should be

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selective

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elective

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classes

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for

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the student

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student

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students

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who

are

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interested.

However

, many

people

think that the

course

has many benefits for daily life which should be a primary

course

. In my opinion, I strongly agree

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the latter views that the

preperation

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preparation

food program is important and

student

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students

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should learn for living in the future.