Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals.Other say that there are more important enviromental problem. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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the extiention
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extiention
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extinction
extension
of certain
species
of
plants
and
animals
is
main
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the main
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enviromental
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environmental
problem
of our time.
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other
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others
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are of
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opinion
that
ther
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there
are more
siginificant enviromental
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significant environmental
problem
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this
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we will discuss both
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in
details
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. On the one hand ,
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issues
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like
wiping
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the wiping
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out of certain
species
of
plant
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plants
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and
animals
can disrupt
whole
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the whole
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food chain.
This
can cause some
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cascading
effect
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effects
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and result
like
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increased in
polution
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pollution
of other
species
or
wiping
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the wiping
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out of some
species
.Which can be either good or bad.
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of
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such
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extension
is of
dinosours
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dinosaurs
lead
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to
emergence
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the emergence
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of humans.So
effect
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the effect
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on
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the enviromental
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enviromental
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environment
by
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of
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this
problem
cannot be certain.
This
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issues
can
some
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apply
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be
treath
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treated
to
creatin
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create
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species
of
plants
and
animals
but not all
ecosystem
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ecosystems
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.
But
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on the other hand
,
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issues
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like global warming , air
pollution
etc. are
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affecting
so entire ecosystem.
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issue if not
handeled
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handled
can
extient
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extend
all the life
of
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on
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the planet.
Issus
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Issues
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like global warming can cause melting of ice which can lead to submerge of various lifeform living on the land resulting in
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extinction
extension
extiention
of
species
survaving
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surviving
on land.Air
pollution
if
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is
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root
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the root
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causus
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causes
cause
of many health
issues
not only in humans but
also
in other
animals
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animal
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species
.
Plants
are
also
dieing
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dying
out
due to
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these
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this
issues
.Water
pollution
are
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threat
of
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entire marine life.
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issues
are at
global
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a global
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scale
which
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needs
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need
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more attention because are not only
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a threath
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threath
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threat
threaten
to
entire
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the entire
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lifecycle of
animals
and
plants
on the earth. In conclusion,
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of
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certain
plants
and
animals
are
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problematic to
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the enviroment
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enviroment
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environment
it is limited to
small
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a small
the small
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number of
species
.
While
enviromnetal
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environmental
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problems
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problem
like global warming ,air and water
pollution
etc. may cause
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the extiention
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extiention
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extinction
extension
of
entire
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the entire
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life on the earth.
This
issues
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issue
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needs to be taken more seriously.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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