Write a letter to an airline manager regarding your bad experience on a recent flight. Pease say Where and when did you fly? – What happened on the flight? – Give a suggestion how this issue could be resolved or prevented.

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Dear sir/madam, I hope
this
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letter finds you well. I am writing
this
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letter to you regarding of that I was
unsastisfied
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unsatisfied
satisfied
with your flight service. I have
took
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a flight from Mildura to Tasmania
at
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last
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weekend, it was
an
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unpleasant travelled for me, as
it
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I have been ordered a meal for my trip, it was
a
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curry chicken rice. The meal was too salty and the chicken was only half cooked. I am so
dissappointed
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disappointed
with your
cheaf
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chef
chief
cheap
as I paid extra 30 dollars for the chicken curry rice.
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, I desired to have a nice lunch or at least a well-cook dish. Eventually, I have been sick for 2 days after I ate the
row
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raw
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meat.
Forthermore
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Furthermore
, I strongly suggest that your cook should ensure the food qualities and the taste of the food is right
,
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before they
are provide
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are provided
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to the customer. I think you should organise an experience
cheaf
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chef
chief
or a qualities check person in the kitchen to ensure
everthing
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everything
is fresh and
save
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to eat. Yours faithfully June

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • introduction
  • briefly
  • describe
  • origin
  • destination
  • negative
  • experience
  • delayed
  • unclean
  • inattentive
  • quality
  • technical difficulties
  • entertainment system
  • emotional impact
  • inconvenience
  • discomfort
  • disappointment
  • resolution
  • compensation
  • improvement
  • maintenance
  • upgrading
  • services
  • systems
  • closing
  • request
  • response
  • action
  • improved
  • thank
  • attention
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