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THE FOREST AND THE NEED TO PRESERVE IT. WHAT DO YOU THINK ABOUT THAT?

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Our plant has several forests distributed on several continents, Each forest has a unique character and qualities that make it special. To preserve these characteristics the human being should consider and spend a lot of resources. In
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 of all, the governments add new laws that enable farmers to cut trees in certain ways and in specific regions. If any person violates
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 law
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 will receive severe penalties. Recently, the natural reserve found 90% of men who goes outside to do a picnic cut the tree to kindle firewood. These activities were threaten animals as birds lives.
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, protect of our planet can maintain our Ecosystem and our environment, If we cut all the trees
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 the temperature become very high and the rate of CO2 will remain in our atmosphere. The imbalance between air gases maybe
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 the rate of pollution which lead to the prevalence of disease becoming elevated. Recently, many studies found the percentage of polluted airplay a crucial role in increasing the rate of respiratory cancer among human beings. In conclusion, our plant conservation is our responsibility to keep our health intact.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • deforestation
  • carbon sequestration
  • sustainable forest management
  • ecosystem
  • climate regulation
  • habitat preservation
  • renewable resources
  • environmental balance
  • conservation
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