Many people assume that the goal of every country should be to produce more materials and goods To what extend do you agree or disagree that constantly increasing production is an appropriate goal

Many people think that each and every nation has a primary goal for should be manufacturing tons of materials like electronics tools, basic needs and etc. I strongly agree with

this

statement and

this

essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.

To begin

with, a lot of manufacturing products can increase the countries economy tremendously because these kinds of sectors can be earned more profit.

For example

, China is the largest production country

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around the

world

,

thus

, they earn a million amount of profit from

world

trade. Not only

they

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earn profit but

also

they can supply manufacturing goods

to

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around the

world

; their's local residents

also

have many

benefit

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from

this

like they can get any product without paying any imported tax.

Furthermore

, some nations give more

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to

tourism

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industry rather than production because they can obtain a million amount of earnings from

tourism

.

For instance

, Thailand spends one trillion

dollar

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for

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tourism

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each year,

as a result

, many overseas visitors like to visit

this

state as compared

any

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other state.

In addition

, some territories

also

focus on

entertainment

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sector,

for example

, in South Korea

spents

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spent

spends

three million dollars for

this

sector in order to many international visitors visit

this

country for entertainment

such

as BTS music show is

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very popular to around the globe. To conclude, producing materials are increased each and every territorys' economy undoubtedly; there are some other

industry

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also

can provide more earnings

such

as entertainment and

tourism

.

Therefore

, I strongly agree with

this

statement. I believe that constantly increasing manufacturing is an appropriate aspect among the

world

.