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some people think secondary school students should learn international news as one of their subjects, while others believe that this is a waste of valuable time. Discuss both views ang give your opinion

#people #school #students #news #subjects #waste #time #ang
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recently
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 years , globalization tend to reach a peak. So knowing information about other countries in the world is very necessary especially for the developing countries. Many people think that learning affairs
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 a waste of time.
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 and
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also
 explain why I feel it should not be required.
Firstly
, studying international news as one of
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 programs will increase
students
 significant
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. children could get familiar with what is happening in the different nations, increase their knowledge the others countries.
This
 will prepare an important step for their future learning.
However
 junior high
school
student
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 are too young to acquire the following knowledge.
Secondly
, secondary
school
students
 can be conflicted in information easily . Adding more
subject
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 seems to be impossible for children who are under
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 of 15. Studying about
new
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subject
 while
curriculum
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 is already overloaded with a number of different subjects could be stressful for the learners .
morrever
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moreover
forever
 , at that time
students
 have to suffer a very huge pressure
that is
high
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school
 entrance exam.
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 will lead
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teacher
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 to teach 6th and
7th grade
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students
 , which will be even more impossible because their receptive abilities aren’t good enough at that time. In conclusion , learning about global news is very good but studying that
subject
 seems to be too soon for children. Teaching
this
subject
 at high
school
 could be better.
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