You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job Write a letter to shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter -describe the problem with the equipment -explain how this problem is affecting your work -say what you want the shop or company to do

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Dear Sir, I am Annie Willson , one of the regular customers of your electronic shop located at Parkinson Square.

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letter is in regards to a recent purchase of a docking station. The product worked absolutely fine for the

first

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week.

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, the USB ports are not responding when a new device is being connected to it.

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issue is a blocker for my office work while working from home. Indeed, it is of utmost importance to connect multiple display screens like monitors and laptops.

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, there were additional connecting cables provided and none of them seems to be appropriate due to inconsistent port designs and length. As a matter of fact, prolonged usage of devices is causing overheating.

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, I request you to replace the instrument as it is still under warranty period. Kindly let me know if any

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details are required like bill receipt and model details. Looking forward to your prompt response. Yours Sincerely Annie Willson

suryathakur05Thu Dec 23 2021

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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6 paragraphs

161 words

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