In the future ,nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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the newspapers and
books
which
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printed will not be purchased in the future because all of the individuals will have access to online context without any payment .It seems to me that
this
theory might be correct and no one does not pay for printed text .
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with, the globe update regularly and everything
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to
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around the world .To elaborate more ,there are several things which are used from
internet
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the internet
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like online
books
or even individuals read the news from
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a website
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website
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such
as BBC and it does not need to pay for newspapers .
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, except
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books
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people search on websites for every information which they want .
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,students do not
need
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go to the library for reading and
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huge data in
the
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lot of
books
for their school research and pay some money each time that they go. Evidently ,they can search by keywords and
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some notes quickly. From another point of view ,some of the people feel more comfortable in
this
case because they do not like flipping through the book and
thiss
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this
development make them feel better . It is true to say that, some people like touch and
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the page of the
books
or some of them like go to
library
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.Despite
this
,it seems that
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most
of
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the
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individuals can read and study easier. To sum up ,as I mentioned reading
books
and news online might be an
atractive
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attractive
development ,particularly anyone does not pay for buying the printed paper.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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