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Popular hobbies and interests change over time and are more a reflection of trends and fashions than an indication f what individuals really want to do in their spare time. To what extent do you agree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer.

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Every
people
 have hobby and interest. Some
people
 think that
hobbies
 and
interests
change
 day by day. Now
people
 are very much interested in trends and fashions. In their leisure ,times they do different things that are new. I agree with the statement that,
hobbies
 and
interests
change
 over
time
.
To begin
 with, in the past
people
 showed their interest in collecting stamps, reading books, drawing and so on. Now
people
 do not have
time
 for those.
People
 are now busy with their social media, mobile phone and so on.
In addition
 , in a previous
time
 ,when
people
 got the free
time
 they utilised it by doing their favourite work.Some
people
 like to write a diary and some
people
 like gardening,whereas, now due to modern technology
people
's hobby and
interests
 has changed.They now do shopping in their spare
time
.
Moreover
,they watch movies on their phones ,
for example
, my friend's favourite hobby was drawing,but now she loves to watch movies on her phone when she got
free
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time
.
Thus
,I can say that
hobbies
 and
interests
change
 over
time
.
On the other hand
, though
people
hobbies
 and
interests
 have changed there are some
people
also
 whose
hobbies
 and
interests
 did not
change
.
In addition
 , there are many
people
 who like the thing they used to do ,
for instance
,my Neighbor is 45 years old since my childhood I saw that she loves gardening.
Moreover
,though nowadays
people
 have availability of many modern technologies 5hey think it will not good for them,it is a bad habit .They love to listening music in their free
time
 as they did before.They find it very interesting than doing shopping and follows modern trends. In conclusion,I can say that the
hobbies
 and
interests
change
 over
time
 now
people
 follow modern trends and fashion in their free
time
 , they like to do new things.
Hence
 I agree with the statement.
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