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Studying the English language in an English-speaking country is the best but not the only way to learn language. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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People are thinking that studying English in an English-speaking atmosphere is the best
way
 to learn a
language
, but
that is
 not the only
way
 to do it. In my opinion, I totally agree with
this
 idea. It would be the best
way
 to learn any
language
 by living in that
language
-speaking
country
.
However
, not anyone can have the audacity to travel to another
country
.
First
, living in a foreign
country
 enabled you to speak their
language
, since it is the key to
survive
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 in another
country
. You are constantly learning what they are doing every day, you can learn their accent, their expressions and their culture as well, and by doing so, you will improve your
language
 skills
by
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a lot.
For example
, one of my cousins had
traveled
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travelled
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 to Japan two years ago, despite knowing very
few
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 Japanese, she studied with a friend, who helped her a lot during the time over there. And now, she has the ability to speak Japanese like a native speaker.
However
, not everyone has the ability to travel to a foreign
country
 due to the costs and the Corona Virus situation. You absolutely can study a
language
 without
traveling
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, new ways to learn
language
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the language
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 are everywhere in your local area, classes of various languages are opening
due
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 the high-demanding of
language
-learning. Many applications on your device nowadays can teach you,
for instance
, English or Spanish,
such
 as Duolingo, and it can hook you up with some native speaker in order for you to improve yourself. In conclusion, I think the best
way
 to learn a
language
 is by
traveling
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, learning from the native people, but it is not the only
way
 to learn a
language
. And only you can decide what is the
way
 that suits you the best.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • immersion
  • fluency
  • advanced
  • communicate
  • accommodate
  • exposure
  • cultural understanding
  • native speakers
  • educational institutions
  • resources
  • diverse
  • globalized
  • interact
  • self-study
  • online courses
  • tutors
  • language exchange
  • books
  • videos
  • podcasts
  • language proficiency
  • language barrier
  • conversation partners
  • progress
  • motivated
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