Question: In order to alive traffic problems, government should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportlong. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

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present
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day scenario, where we see huge traffic jams and heavy
pollution
on the roads. Government should look at
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option of taxing individual car
owners
highly and using that funds in improving public transport. In the below paragraph we discuss
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and cons of
this
solution.
Firstly
, I believe
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an important role in reducing the number of
vehicles
on road, which can help in bringing down the
pollution
levels. In some countries,
this
also
leads to huge noise
pollution
,
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during peak hours adding pressure to human lives.
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these individual
vehicles
are used by
rich
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the rich
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, who have money and are looking at
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option of spending them. These individual
owners
are not worried about
welfare
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of society. I had myself seen my friend and his wife, driving to
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office in individual
vehicles
, while they can go in one car or use public transport. Mostly individual
vehicle s
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vehicles
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are used by people who want to do showoff. On the other
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,
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vehicle
owners
are already paying enough taxes. They should not be
further
troubled. It is the choice of
individual
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to be on his own, which should be respected. When a person drives their own
vehicle
, they save
lot
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of time, which can be used in other activities. My friend who drives to
office
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,
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is able to travel in thirty minutes,
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where as
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public transport takes nintu minutes to
same
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route. Since driving is relaxing and
reduceses
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reduces
stress, it should be encouraged or left in current condition. Taxing
further
to individual
vehicle
owners
will be inhuman,
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place
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like Sydney, where
vehicle
owners
pay nearly three thousand dollars for
vehicle
registration, tax and insurance. To conclude, I opine, with regular increase in fuel prices and other
vehicle related
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vehicle-related
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expenses like road tax, registration cost and maintenance cost.
Vehicle
taxes should not be
further
increased. Whereas to reduce the traffic and
pollution
,
government
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can look at reducing movement of
vehicles
by
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other subsidies. Traffic officers can increase fees for
offenses
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than increase taxes. Overall authorities should have some limitations and have a balanced approach.
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