As global trade increase, many goods including those we use in daily basis are produced in another country and have to be transport long distance. Do benefit of this trend outweigh disadvantages?

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Ample of items
such
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as basic needs items like
fruit
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or
vegetables
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transported from one nation where manufacture the items to other nation because of globalization.
This
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essay intends to say that the demerit is the freshness of any
fruit
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cant be maintained and the benefit is that we can get a variety of foods. In my opinion, their benefits overcome their demerits.
firstly
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, any
fruit
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or vegetable cant be maintained as their original freshness because of the long hour distance.
For instance
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, dragon
fruit
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is the origin of china so it is imported from china to India but due to the hot Indian weather, when it comes to selling destination it does not look as fresh as it should be.
Secondly
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,
cost
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of the imported
fruits
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and
vegetables
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is high so people don’t buy
it
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very often. So we should go for seasonal local
fruits
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and
vegetables
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.
However
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, I believe that we should enjoy overseas foods
instead
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of watching only their
cost
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. There are numerous reasons to try and enjoy other country’s food.
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, if our country import some
fruits
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like avocado and kiwi from Australia, yellow watermelon from china, blueberries from the USA, so in
this
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way, we can enjoy a variety of
fruits
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to taste and
also
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packed with the good nutrient.
Although
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the
cost
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is high, we should try in minimum quantity. In conclusion,
instead
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of seeing the
cost
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of food, we should try it for once so that we can get more
fruits
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and
vegetables
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to taste.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

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  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

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