Some people think that schools should reward students who show the best academic results, while others believe that it is more important to reward students who show improvements. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Academic

results

are paramount to education. Few people argue that

schools

should provide some sort of prize to the student who brings the best academic

results

. While some debates that reward should be provided to the ones who

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improving in their studies.

This

essay will discuss the reasons for the

rewards

to be given to the student who is improving or the one who is best in academic

results

, and it will

also

explain why the

rewards

should be provided to academic

results

only. Some people debates, that

schools

should provide

rewards

to young

students

who brings the best academic

results

. It will motivate the toppers to stay at the top, while others will

also

work hard to reach that position so that competition will be maintained among the

students

.

For instance

, In Ryan international

school

, after announcing the

rewards

of 500$ for A++ grades, a sudden surge of about 20% for A++ grades was seen. It can be said that providing the

prizes

to cream

students

is fruitful for the

schools

. Few people

also

argue that

rewards

should be provided to the

students

who are improving in their studies. It will help them to motivate in their studies, but providing the

rewards

to all the

students

who are improving would be more costly and less reliable.

For example

, from the class of 60 ,

students

40

students

improved by 5 to 6 marks. The

school

might have to provide the

prizes

which will cost the

schools

for

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just

few

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a few

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marks.

Hence

, providing the

prizes

for all improving

students

will be costlier for the

school

In the conclusion, though it is fair to think about providing the

prizes

to all the

students

who are improving. but it will become costlier for the

school

.