Some believe that the best way to stay fit is to join a gym or health club while others think doing everyday activities such as walking and climbing stairs is enough. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Health is a major concern for everyone in
this
world, while some
people
think that in order to be fit, being a member of a
gym
or a health
club
is the most suitable method, others argue that some actions that we do every day are already enough. I believe that we should not only just exercise to keep our bodies healthy but we
also
ought to choose our diets wisely. On the one hand, applying for a
gym
or a fitness
club
has many advantages that make
people
agree that these methods work for them the most. In these places, there are a lot of facilities that
people
could use as a way to exercise,
such
as a treadmill or dumbbell.
Therefore
,
people
would not be bored since there are various options for them,
moreover
, they could
also
play sports, in some places there would be swimming pools or tennis courts located inside those
gym
or
club
buildings.
For example
, a
gym
that I went to once had many interesting
gym
equipments
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, because of
this
, made me have a strong urge to come to exercise in
this
gym
again.
On the other hand
, walking and climbing stairs were already tiring for some
people
and sometimes it can even make them sweat so
this
could be one of the reasons why they have a perception that just doing
this
would help them have a healthy life.
For instance
, when I was a child, I had to climb the stairs every day in order to go to my classroom,
this
always makes me think that maybe I burn all my calories because I had sweat all over my face. In conclusion, I believe that whether joining a
gym
or fitness
club
or just walking and climbing the stairs, it would not lead
people
to a healthy life in the future unless they have their food properly and useful for them.
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