The current interest in famous people’s private lives has negative effects both for those people and for society as a whole. Newspapers should not be allowed to publish details of people’s private lives unless it is clearly in the public interest. Decide how strongly you agree or disagree and write an essay that discusses why.
People
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more
interested Add a missing verb
are more
on
famous Change preposition
in
people
's private Use synonyms
life
rather than Use synonyms
focus
on their own Wrong verb form
focusing
life
, journalists Use synonyms
also
publish Linking Words
about
their Change preposition
apply
routine
in Fix the agreement mistake
routines
Add an article
the newspaper
a newspaper
newspaper
. Some say it should get Fix the agreement mistake
newspapers
publish
and others like me disagree with it that it should not be Wrong verb form
published
on
Change preposition
in
newspaper
until Correct article usage
the newspaper
its
not between Replace the word
it's
it is
public
.
Correct article usage
the public
Begin
with, getting to know Wrong verb form
Beginning
about
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apply
someone
's private Use synonyms
life
and a Use synonyms
person
who is famous is a trending topic. But don't get that a Use synonyms
person
or you can Use synonyms
celebrity
Use synonyms
life
gets affected and it will make them feel irritated because once they get out from their house all their fans standing outside to see a Use synonyms
person
and Use synonyms
gets
Change the verb form
get
picture
with them. Now after Add an article
a picture
this
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journalist
comes they click their photos and put Use synonyms
it
between public. Correct pronoun usage
them
For example
, a Linking Words
celebrity
is travelling abroad for vacation with his/her family and Use synonyms
Use synonyms
journalist
will click a picture will write a Correct article usage
a journalist
celebrity
is travelling abroad with his family and all the details about them. It should not be allowed to post or write all the details about a Use synonyms
person
it's his private Use synonyms
life
. But if, a Use synonyms
person
from himself allowing to do that Use synonyms
then
it is different.
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On the other hand
, Linking Words
job
done by Correct article usage
a job
Use synonyms
journalist
will give fame to a Add an article
a journalist
celebrity
and it will make them Use synonyms
to
grow even Change the verb form
apply
more
higher but sometimes Change the word
apply
celebrity
gets irritated because of his mood maybe by doing Use synonyms
this
he/she may get defame and Linking Words
public
will not like them and their carrier must be in trouble by doing Correct article usage
the public
this
they will become their own enemy and can trouble in future. it can lead to a Linking Words
person
depression, Use synonyms
axniety
and many more. Correct your spelling
anxiety
for example
if one gets depression and he Linking Words
commit
Change the verb form
commits
sucide
the fans of a particular will Correct your spelling
suicide
broke
and can take any step which can affect Wrong verb form
break
community
.
As per my knowledge, Add an article
the community
a community
people
should not get Use synonyms
in
Change preposition
into
someone
's personal Use synonyms
life
if Use synonyms
its
a normal Correct your spelling
it's
person
or a Use synonyms
celebrity
it will make Use synonyms
someone
's Use synonyms
life
disturbing and Use synonyms
Use synonyms
journalist
Fix the agreement mistake
journalists
also
should not post things until Linking Words
its
not between public.
To sum up, Replace the word
it's
it is
people
should focus on their own Use synonyms
life
and let others do their work so it will not affect their Use synonyms
life
and Use synonyms
someone
's other Use synonyms
life
Use synonyms
also
or else it will affect the community and Linking Words
spreads
negativity.Wrong verb form
spread
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