You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter • explain your situation • describe your problems • tell him/her when you think you can start.

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Dear Sir, or Madam, I’m writing to tell you about refusing your suggestion for employment that I always have wished
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I applied for it. At the moment I have a
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job as an accountant at a private company but due to my education and interests
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career isn’t my
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so I decided to change my job. Unfortunately, nowadays I have to leave my hometown and move to the countryside in order to take care of my father because he is sick and I’m
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I can’t accept your offer
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week. I would like to say whenever I could find a nurse or one of my relatives for paying attention to my father definitely I will accept
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occupation and I will start it as soon as possible. I look forward to hearing from seeing you. Best regards, Mary Miller,
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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