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Some people say history is on of the most important subjects. Other people think that , in today's world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, a part of
people
 believe the most essential course for pupils is
history
, other societies believe in the current times
science
 and
technology
 are most useful than
history
. I agree with both sides of view, in my way all of those can be useful for students. On the one hand ,
history
 records important events and record the evidence in the past. Most students should know about that to develop the previous ideas. For more expression, the discovery illustrates the events of
humans
, the process in different kinds of living forms of
humans
 in particular times on earth.
For example
,
history
 displays the process of creating
humans
, tribes, continents, wars, peace and disease,
history
 gathers a
lot
 of information about early
humans
 how to deal with those events. Today
people
 take a
lot
 of advantages and experiences from
history
 to solve their problems.
On the other hand
 , in modern times,
science
 and
technology
 should be taught to students to improve society.
In other words
,
people
 who know about
science
 and
technology
 can get a good job .
History
 may be informed
people
 about the past but
people
 can not earn a
lot
 of money from that.
For example
, Rashid is one of
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a scientist
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scientist
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 who studied a
lot
 about the past and
uses
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 of them in modern treatment with modern
technology
. He always emphasizes
history
 is vital as well as
science
. To sum up , in the modern area, communities realize all of the courses are related to each other and it would be better all off pupils have information about them to develop the country.
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