Today many parents force rhier children to study all kinds of courses in the early age . What are the reason behind this.? What effects do you think this practice would bring to gbs children?

Dear Dean Fields, My name is Shuning GUAN (Nina). I am writing

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letter to support my application

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the Master of Management -- Business

Data

Analytics

program

at

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of Windsor for the fall of 2022. It is my intent to attend Odette School of Business, and

University

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of Windsor is my

first

choice. I graduated from Royal Melbourne Institution Technology (RMIT) with a Master’s degree in Professional Accounting with a GPA of 2.8 of 4 in December 2019. While attending RMIT, I took the CPA Australia exam and successfully passed all six subjects once during one year, which taught me how to make financial reports and analyse

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economic environment of organizations. After graduating from RMIT, I worked for a transportation company and a construction organization as an accountant. When I worked for those two companies, my main job responsibility was entering journals and preparing financial statements and reports, which improved my practical skills of accounting and let me know how to pay enough attention to details and work in a team. After near two-year accounting work, I realize if I want to develop my

career

to another higher level

such

as becoming a financial manager or a financial adviser rather than working as an accountant in my entire life, I need to be equipped with analysis abilities and techniques which are my weakness and I never knew previously, so I having been looking for some

study

programs about analysis, and the

program

of your

university

attracted me. After reading the

program

description presented on the

university

official website, I find there are several attractions for me to

study

.

First

of all, compared to a huge number of

study

programs of other universities, the

program

of your

university

only takes 16 months,

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means I will be able to complete my

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such

a short term and continue my

career

in the near future, which is quite less time-consuming.

In addition

, there are a lot of subjects which are related to analyzing the global economic environment and the external environment of an organization

such

as Finance in a Global Perspective and International Business, which will teach me

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my eyes on the whole world rather than only the inside of a firm.

Moreover

, the five specific subjects about

data

analytics, especially

Data

Analytic Method and Algorithms, will teach me particular techniques about

data

analyse, which are an area that I am keen to learn. I am passionate about accounting and management. My academic goals include exploring more cutting-edge knowledge and techniques, which widens my horizon and broadens my

career

prospect. I plan to become a financial manager in a company or join

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a consulting company as an advisor rather than working as an accountant in the near future. I believe that studying

this

program

will enrich my mindset and help me to achieve my

career

goal easily. Thank you for your considering my application. It would be an

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to continue my

study

and

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my passion at the

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of Windsor. If you have any questions, please contact me without hesitation. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully,

Shuning

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Shunning

Shining

GUAN