You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter, • describe the problem with the equipment • explain how this problem is affecting your work • say what you want the shop or company to do

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to draw your attention to the issue of my
laptop
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charger not working. I made a purchase of a new
laptop
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on the 25 of December at your store in lotus road, attached is a copy of the receipt for your reference. Unfortunately, the charging cable stopped working after two days of use, and ever since I am unable to use my
laptop
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.
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has indeed created a lot of trouble at my workplace, I was unable to attend a few meetings and finish my work on time. Since I work from home, my
laptop
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is very much crucial for my job, and I require an immediate solution for
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problem. I urge you to deliver a new charger at your earliest to the same
addresss
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address
which was provided at the time of purchase. Please consider
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matter to be urgent and I expect your prompt action on
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. Hoping to hear from you soon. Your’s faithfully, Jack Fernando
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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