Some people think students should study the science of food and how to prepare it. Others think that school time should be used in learning important subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Firstly
, studying the science of
food
has some advantages. It might improve students’ life skills. They can prepare
food
it is themselves
also
less dependent on their parents. Some of them may go to live alone to separate from their parent, so
this
cooking skill is very useful for them. And if you are small, you can help your parents by cooking with them. Having knowledge about
food
can assist us in many dangerous moments
such
as survival.
For instance
, when you are stuck in a forest and your emergency
food
is run out. At
this
moment, you have to cook something to eat, and
this
life skill
that is
the most important which is not in your notebook. Knowing about
this
plant can help you check if it’s toxic or eatable. So that, the science of
food
should be added as a subject in a school.
Besides
, learning about not only the science of
food
also
many many things around our life can relax us from the stressful lesson in class.
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