Many people believe that zoos have no purpose in today’s world and should be closed. What problems do zoos bring? What are the alternatives to zoos if they are closed?

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Nowadays
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are more conscious about
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rights and wellbeing and many of them believe that
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have no purpose in today´s world. It is often affirmed that
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are meaningless to our society and it has been questioned whether they provide benefits to
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and
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, or should be closed. Some
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view
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as cruel prisons for
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. Why is that? Wild
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are not meant to live in cages or in small places. They need to be in
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natural environment to be happy and live the wildlife they are supposed to. The purpose of
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is to show the wild
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to
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in the cities and at the same time protect the species. But are they actually being protected? Or just removed from
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habitats for Human profit?
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bring is the quality
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, which is less than the quality of life they would have in
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natural habitat.
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stop using their natural hunting instincts and become almost domesticated. In terms of alternatives, there are a few options that we have. Wildlife parks are becoming more popular in today’s world. These provide more space for
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to wander around and they provide a habitat
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is more similar to
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’ natural homes. It should be noted that there are many wonderful organizations around the world that have set up sanctuaries for rescued farm
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. These sanctuaries offer an engaging, interactive experience and most allow you to get right up close to the
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, which kids of all ages will be sure to love. Some sanctuaries
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have accommodations located right on their properties so you can take the kids and make it a memorable, educational time away. As we can see,
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are not the only way for humans to see and learn about wild
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. If there were no
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, it would still be possible for scientists and ordinary
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to preserve and experience nature.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ethical and animal welfare
  • artificial habitats
  • psychological distress
  • abnormal behaviors
  • conservation
  • inbreading
  • wildlife sanctuaries
  • rehabilitation centers
  • naturalistic habitats
  • virtual and augmented reality
  • ecotourism
  • wildlife documentaries
  • educational platforms
  • genetic pool
  • immersive experiences
  • conservation education
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