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Many people believe that zoos have no purpose in today’s world and should be closed. What problems do zoos bring? What are the alternatives to zoos if they are closed?

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Nowadays
people
 are more conscious about
animal´s
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 rights and wellbeing and many of them believe that
zoos
 have no purpose in today´s world. It is often affirmed that
zoos
 are meaningless to our society and it has been questioned whether they provide benefits to
people
 and
animals
, or should be closed. Some
people
 view
zoos
 as cruel prisons for
animals
. Why is that? Wild
animals
 are not meant to live in cages or in small places. They need to be in
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there
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 natural environment to be happy and live the wildlife they are supposed to. The purpose of
zoos
 is to show the wild
animals
 to
people
 in the cities and at the same time protect the species. But are they actually being protected? Or just removed from
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 habitats for Human profit?
Firstly
, one of the problems
that’s
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zoos
 bring is the quality
life
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 of the
animals
, which is less than the quality of life they would have in
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 natural habitat.
In addition
 to
this
,
animals
 stop using their natural hunting instincts and become almost domesticated. In terms of alternatives, there are a few options that we have. Wildlife parks are becoming more popular in today’s world. These provide more space for
animals
 to wander around and they provide a habitat
which
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 is more similar to
animals
’ natural homes. It should be noted that there are many wonderful organizations around the world that have set up sanctuaries for rescued farm
animals
. These sanctuaries offer an engaging, interactive experience and most allow you to get right up close to the
animals
, which kids of all ages will be sure to love. Some sanctuaries
also
 have accommodations located right on their properties so you can take the kids and make it a memorable, educational time away. As we can see,
zoos
 are not the only way for humans to see and learn about wild
animals
. If there were no
zoos
, it would still be possible for scientists and ordinary
people
 to preserve and experience nature.
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  • ethical and animal welfare
  • artificial habitats
  • psychological distress
  • abnormal behaviors
  • conservation
  • inbreading
  • wildlife sanctuaries
  • rehabilitation centers
  • naturalistic habitats
  • virtual and augmented reality
  • ecotourism
  • wildlife documentaries
  • educational platforms
  • genetic pool
  • immersive experiences
  • conservation education
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