The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today is by reducing the need for people to travel from home for work, education or shopping. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Recently, there has been an assumption that only by increasing the number of people staying home for study, work, or even purchasing goods will city

traffic

be improved. From my own perspective, I find myself partly a

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with

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opinion.

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essay will elaborate more on the reasons for the incomplete agreement. On the one hand, it is true that if the need to go out for businesses is reduced,

traffic

congestion is unlikely to take place. The l

ess

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vehicles participating in

traffic

, the clearer the roads will be, especially during rush hours. In fact, when compared with the past, modern technology has made it possible for individuals to work and learn from d

istance.

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They can even order merchandise without any difficulties.

For instance

, with an electrical device or equipment connected to the internet, a student can attend online classes easily and an employee can take part in a meeting with other colleagues.

Therefore

, when their basic needs are ensured it is possible that the times they leave home might be limited.

However

, a decrease o

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the need to go out is not the solely effective approach.

Besides

the mentioned measurement, enhancing the public transport system for citizens is

also

an appropriate method to be considered. If a majority of users are satisfied with the provided service, they might be inclined to travel by public transports.

For example

, punctuality and comfort appear to be taken into consideration during every trip.

Hence

, when

such

demands are met, mass transit may become more popular and preferred by the community. In conclusion, in order to achieve the goal of

traffic

improvement, there could be other approaches

instead

of just persuading people to stay home. Satisfying users with the public service, in my opinion, is a better option for the decline of n

umber

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of vehicles running on roads.