The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today is by reducing the need for people to travel from home for work, education or shopping. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Recently, there has been an assumption that only by increasing the number of people staying home for study, work, or even purchasing goods will city
traffic
be improved. From my own perspective, I find myself partly agree
with Wrong verb form
agreeing
this
opinion. This
essay will elaborate more on the reasons for the incomplete agreement.
On the one hand, it is true that if the need to go out for businesses is reduced, traffic
congestion is unlikely to take place. The less
vehicles participating in Change the quantifier
fewer
traffic
, the clearer the roads will be, especially during rush hours. In fact, when compared with the past, modern technology has made it possible for individuals to work and learn from distance.
They can even order merchandise without any difficulties. Add an article
a distance
For instance
, with an electrical device or equipment connected to the internet, a student can attend online classes easily and an employee can take part in a meeting with other colleagues. Therefore
, when their basic needs are ensured it is possible that the times they leave home might be limited.
However
, a decrease of
the need to go out is not the solely effective approach. Change preposition
in
Besides
the mentioned measurement, enhancing the public transport system for citizens is also
an appropriate method to be considered. If a majority of users are satisfied with the provided service, they might be inclined to travel by public transports. For example
, punctuality and comfort appear to be taken into consideration during every trip. Hence
, when such
demands are met, mass transit may become more popular and preferred by the community.
In conclusion, in order to achieve the goal of traffic
improvement, there could be other approaches instead
of just persuading people to stay home. Satisfying users with the public service, in my opinion, is a better option for the decline of number
of vehicles running on roads.Change the article
a number
the number
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