Some people believe arts subjects such as literature and music have little importance in schools today. To what extent do you agree with this?
In
this
modern era , many parents are encouraging their children to learn science
subjects
like mathematics or physics rather than arts
domain. Some people believe that Correct article usage
the arts
arts
Change the noun form
art
majors
are less important to study in schools .This
essay will discuss more details about both benefits and drawbacks of studying arts
majors
.
On the one hand , there is no doubt that science
and other courses have more carrier oppotunities
and trends Correct your spelling
opportunities
where
compared to Replace the word
were
arts
courses. Change the noun form
art
In addition
, although
governments are also
creating several jobs for business and science
majors
, they are less interested on
Change the preposition
in
arts
majors
. For instance
, many parents and teachers believe that arts
subjects
do not have the job grantee for their children .As a result
, many talented young generations are tried
to attend Wrong verb form
trying
science
or business majors
and that can lead to human resource shortage in that particular country .
On the other hand
, arts
subjects
can bring many positive advantage
to our society . Obviously , artists could not get high Change to a plural noun
advantages
salary
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salaries
compated
to other business or technology Correct your spelling
compared
majors
.For example
, arts
subjects
can improve imagination
and creativity of children .Correct article usage
the imagination
Consequently
, youngesters
might understand and behave positively because of ars Correct your spelling
youngsters
subjects
.
To conclude , arts
subjects
are also
important like
other Replace the word
as
subjects
and we need to balance all subjects
in schools .Otherwise
, we cannot maintain the youngesters
believes and thoughts positively.Correct your spelling
youngsters
youngster
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