The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing. What is the reason for the growth of overweight people in society? How can this problem be solved?
Most
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The most
crowd
are getting serious well-being issues because of increasing statistics of Change to a plural noun
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people
becoming obese. Use synonyms
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the main reason is Correct word choice
that
of
not having enough Change preposition
apply
time
to cook as Use synonyms
people
have Use synonyms
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before,so Use synonyms
people
eat fast Use synonyms
food
more often. Use synonyms
This
could be solved by adding extra Linking Words
tax
to the fast-Use synonyms
foodfood
restaurants.
Nowadays, society Correct your spelling
food food
good food
are
very busy that some of them have two full-Change the verb form
is
timetime
jobs and have Correct your spelling
time time
time-time
not
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no
time
to cook at home which is easier to think of fast Use synonyms
food
as the Use synonyms
first
choice. Fast Linking Words
food
restaurants are often seen on every corner in the Use synonyms
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united
states
and they have really affordable prices that Change the capitalization
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people
are harder to deny to consume. it is easier to get your Use synonyms
food
by getting to the Use synonyms
drive through
and you will have within 10 minutes warm and tasty Add a hyphen
drive-through
food
at very cheap prices. Use synonyms
For example
: 90 per cent of American Linking Words
people
love to eat Carlos junior Hamburgers because are fast, tasty and cheap, so Use synonyms
people
do not have to invest Use synonyms
time
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food
because the flavour, price and the portions are presented as extra sizes for the same inexpensive price. I disagree with Use synonyms
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type of fast Linking Words
food
because Use synonyms
this
is unhealthy Linking Words
food
that will harm Use synonyms
people
's Use synonyms
health
in a very short Use synonyms
time
.
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These poor choice
of consuming fast Change the determiner
This poor choice
These poor choices
food
could be solved by adding an extra Use synonyms
tax
on every fast Use synonyms
food
restaurant so Use synonyms
people
will have to think twice every Use synonyms
time
they want to consume fast Use synonyms
food
. It is not acceptable that citizens chose fast Use synonyms
food
as the main source of Use synonyms
food
because they will become obese and might present Use synonyms
health
issues Use synonyms
which
might end up on chronic diseases. These sick Correct pronoun usage
that
people
will depend on the Use synonyms
health
system and the government will end up paying for their recovery by using citizens' money. Use synonyms
For instance
, Int the United states is common to see obese Linking Words
people
suffering from hypertension due to poor Use synonyms
food
choices in the past, so Use synonyms
health
programs Use synonyms
has
to treat these Change the verb form
have
peoplepeople
for the rest of their lives. Correct your spelling
people people
This
essay totally agrees to add extra Linking Words
tax
on fast Use synonyms
food
to avoid obese statistic going up every year, so Use synonyms
people
will be aware of Use synonyms
this
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health
issue.
To conclude, most Use synonyms
of
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apply
the
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apply
people
are tend to become every year more overweight due to consuming unhealthy Use synonyms
food
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such
as fast Linking Words
food
and Use synonyms
this
issue might be solved by adding an extra Linking Words
tax
on all unhealthy grassy Use synonyms
food
, so citizens might become more aware of Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
health
issue.Use synonyms
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