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children are currently having extra classes after normal lessons. what are the positive and negative effects? what is your opinion

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Parents nowadays always prepare a lot of extracurricular activities for their
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 as music and sports
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 and foreign language course in their spare time. It is undeniable that equipped
children
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 with more skills and abilities can enhance their competitiveness,
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, depending on their mental condition and family background, it may not be a good practice. Some may say the effort has to make to become the best. To equip with more skills and abilities, youngs would have higher bargaining power and competitiveness when they grow up. They might be enabled to enter
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 university or get a job easier than the same age, and even become a professional, the top of the society with fortune and wealth. For some rich families, the above practice might seem easy,
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, for some ordinary families, it might not be. Ordinary families might be able to afford some expenses for extra
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 as some tutorial schools could cost a few thousand more monthly. What's more,
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 would be exhausted to handle more than 10 hours of school every day which they have to wake up at 7 for regular schooling plus 2-3 hours extra
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. The effectiveness would not be significant if the
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 could not handle
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 workload day by day.
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, in my view, the negative impacts of
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 having extra
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 are outweighed by the positive. We should focus more on
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 mental development than academic results.
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