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Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people,however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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Nowadays,
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people
 think the vital goal of governments would be
progession
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progression
 in economic
issue
 but other
believe
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 in
difference
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 ways that they should focus on other
isssues
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issues
. In my view, they should balance focusing goals to uplift growth of economy and quality of
people
 in
same
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 time. There are two main aspects to consider why the most significant goals of
countries
 need to be economic progress.
First
 of all, it would increase the bargaining power of
countries
 among other international
countries
. For
exmaple
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example
, big
countries
such
 as USA and China can deal and
slove
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with
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the hard political
issue
 easily and they gain higher
benefit
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 than small
countries
.
Moreover
, the more growth in
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economic
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economy
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 increase, the more jobs are created.
As a result
, the growth in
countries
 would solve only one angle of
countries
 which is
wealth
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the wealth
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issue
.
On the other hand
, other goals to concern for improving
people
 life in
countries
 are several issues.
Firstly
, the education
issue
 should
concern
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 since it would help
people
 to better off in
term
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terms
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 of
working
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, and quality of citizens.
Secondly
, if the public
falicites
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facilities
 are improved, resulting in the transportation and communication.
Lastly
, public emotion
goal
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goals
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 need to manage
in
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 certain levels
then
 it would help
people
 to have
great
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 life in both direct and indirect ways. To conclude, In my
view
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 governments need to set
goal
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goals
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 in many areas to cover all of
consequences
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the consequences
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 from
people
 in
countries
. If governments only focused on economic progress, some
part
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parts
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 of
countries
 would have shadow
problem
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problems
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 and hurt citizens afterwards.
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