You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter •say where you think you left the paper •explain why they are so important •tell the manager what you want him/her to do

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to let you know that I have forgotten to take some of my important documents along with me while leaving the hotel, after the meeting which was held yesterday the 9th of October. I believe that the document would be lying

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the board room I the

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floor. It is a blue file with a name tag on it and you could easily identify it. These documents are extremely important for me as I have noted down some

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points which would be needed while preparing a presentation to my company top management. And I certainly can not afford to lose them. It would be kind of you

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if you could take them from the board room and have it with you safely until I come in person to collect

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. I will try to make it as early as possible. Thank you in advance for your consideration and hoping to see you soon. Yours faithfully, Sam Smith

swadhi.sivakumarTue Dec 28 2021

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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8 paragraphs

170 words

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