Traffic congestion is a growing problem in many of the world's major cities. Explain some possible reasons of this problem and suggest some solutions.

Due to swelling human activities in daily life,blockage of
traffic
is commonly seen in the most populated
cities
in the world.
although
many
cities
have taken measured to control
this
growing problem,those steps are not adequate for overcoming
this
traffic
system.
this
essay will
firstly
,examine the reasons behind
this
traffic
congestion.
secondly
, illustrate some feasible solutions.
First
of all,It is obvious that numerous big
cities
are struggling to improve vehicle transporting systems.
However
, there is a lot of reasons for growing
this
problem.
firstly
, the old trafficking control system is still dominating in many
cities
.
secondly
, lack of modern
vehicles
which is more sophisticated than old
vehicles
.
thirdly
, educating drivers by which they can obey transporting law which is very important to mitigate
traffic
problems.
For example
,Dhaka is the capital
city
of Bangladesh is
also
known as a
city
of
traffic
population.the prime causes of vehicle jams in Dhaka are old
vehicles
and lack of
traffic
sense who drive the car.
As a result
,despite new and modern
traffic
laws, the authority failed to reduce
traffic
jams in Dhaka
city
.
In contrast
,the
city
authority ought to find out some sophisticated characters which can play a major role
for
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reducing
this
source of transporting trouble.the
first
step could be to make a fine who will break the law.
secondly
,introduce modern
vehicles
which are fewer carbon emissions and
more
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eco approachable.
finally
,take schooling approach who drive the
vehicles
.
For instance
,London, which is the capital of the united kingdom. recently, the applied new
traffic
law which is old
vehicles
are not allowed on road and they welcoming transportation which is emission less carbon
Moreover
,the government encourage to people for using
electric
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car which is more environmentally friendly.
Therefore
, by 2050 London
city
will be zero carbon-free as per authority assumed. To conclude,along with growing population,
vehicles
are increasing with same proportion ,especially in the big
cities
. to mitigate
this
traffic
complication need a source of sophisticated ideas which come with radical transformation in the
traffic
sector.
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