In recent time economic growth has made some people richer in both developed and developing countries. While studies show that people in developing countries are happier now than before, people in developed countries are no happier than they were before. Why do you think this is and what lessons can be learned from it?

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There is no denying the fact that economic
growth
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has improved the standard of living all over the
world
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.
However
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,
growth
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in
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economy
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may mean different things to different
people
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. To the developing
world
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, recent
growth
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may be coupled with a rise in standards of living, and
thus
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seen as positive. To the already developed
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,
this
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growth
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brings with it increased global competitiveness, and is
thus
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seen as negative. Both sides will be analyzed in
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essay. The lesson we get from
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different perception towards
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of
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economy
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shall
also
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be discussed. For
people
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in the developing
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it means better opportunities for personal and professional
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. More and more
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in developing
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such
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as India and China now earn more than enough to lead comfortable lives. Now they have high disposable incomes that make it possible for them to lead luxurious lives. They can now buy the latest gadgets, travel to the most exotic places on earth and own luxury apartments and cars. Their children now get
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-class education and healthcare. None of these would have been possible if the
economy
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wasn't growing. Needless to say, for
people
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in the developing
world
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growth
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in the
economy
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is a positive development.
On the other hand
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, economic
growth
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has a different meaning for
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in the developed
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.
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of
people
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in the developed
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already lead comfortable lives. They already possess disposable income and the recent
growth
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in the global
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hasn't really done anything to
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improve their standard of living. What is more, they now face stiff competition from their counterparts in
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developing
countries
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. Their market share has started eroding. They are no longer the most sought after candidates for
jobs
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even in their own
countries
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. Worse still, more and more
jobs
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now get outsourced to the developing
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, where the cost of labour is low compared to that in the West.
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of
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people
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in the developed
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are now losing their
jobs
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. Needless to say, they aren't all that happy with
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sudden spurt in
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the global
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economy
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. The lesson we learn is that
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growth
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the growth
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of
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economy
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the economy
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in
developing
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the developing
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world
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should not hamper the
economy
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of the
people
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of the developed
countries
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.
Jobs
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and opportunities for the
people
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of the developing
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should
be generate
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within their
countries
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and not in the developed
countries
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. Governments of developed
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should not
lay-off
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their
people
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to give low paid
jobs
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to others. To sum up, the facts given above should explain why researchers feel that
people
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in
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developing
countries
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are happier with the
growth
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in
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economy
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than the
people
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in the developed
world
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. These viewpoints are not expected to change much into the foreseeable future unless some steps are taken.
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