You use the local swimming pool often, and during one of your visits, you have encountered a problem. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter describe what the problem was tell what the swimming pool staff have done about it suggest your own solution to the problem.

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Dear Sir or Madam,

This

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is John Smith writing, to draw your attention to the broken tile in the swimming pool area.

Although

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, I am a member of the pool and a usual visitor,

however

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this

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issue has made it very inconvenient for me to use the service any longer.

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with, I noticed that the tile in the diving area is damaged, and it could harm anyone who steps on it.

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, with time it seems that the breakage is increasing even more. Even though

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I have already notified the staff,

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, there is no action taken to date.

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, I strongly advise the management to take immediate measures in rectifying the issue.

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, please make sure the pool is closed until the problem is resolved, since it is not in a condition for use, and quite dangerous for the swimmers. I hope prompt action would be taken in

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regard. Yours faithfully, John Smith

swadhi.sivakumarWed Dec 29 2021

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

157 words

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