You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear neighbours, Hi, I am your neighbour who lives

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door to you. I apologize for what happened

last

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week and I am truly sorry for the noise caused by my daughter. I insist to write

this

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letter as a formal apology. Please let me explain what happened that night.

First

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, I admit that it is sometimes difficult for single mothers like me to handle the relationship between myself and my teenage daughter. She had played the video games for nearly 4 hours after dinner, So I had to convince her to go to bed

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of continuing to play.

However

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, a peaceful argument somehow tends to loud quarrels.

Finally

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, we both realized argument is not helpful at all. I apologize to wake you up at late night and I am

also

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considering better ways in educating my child. In fact, my daughter actually had a verbal agreement with me that she made a promise to go to bed on time. So it will not happen again as we promised. Yours faithfully, Gina

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

173 words

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