The problems caused by work-related stress (such as lack of productivity) have become a concern for both employers and workers. What do you think are the main causes of work- related stress and how they can be avoid?

Lacking productivity as known as burning out situation is one of the essential factors connected with working performance, particularly in the current day.

However

, it is thought that

this

obstacle is caused by working overload. From my point of view, managers should hand over

this

problem as soon as possible. In the

next

paragraphs, supporting reasons with actual examples and suggestions will be outlined in detail.

First

of all, overtime working and lacking in work-life balancing are the problems

which

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lead to depression.

For instance

, the Nation Mental Health Organisation showed the research that the number of overtime periods in employers has increased to 30 per cent in recent years.

Moreover

, the officers have little

time

to look after themselves. As the result, the stress levels in

office

workers

have risen steadily. From

this

research, it is clear to believe

that

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that office worker

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office

workers

who lack in balancing between working life and relaxing

time

can be stressed easily.

Secondly

, all the managers should understand

this

situation and find some facilities that cure their employers from burning out periods.

For example

, the Google company gave more holidays to their

workers

as their employees were struggling from depression and lacking motivation. From

this

solution, manners will find some relaxing

time

to relieve their tensity and try to be active again. From

this

view, giving some relaxing

time

to their employees helps them reduce their stress and become more active

on

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profession

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the profession

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. In conclusion, according to the passage provided, losing work-life balance is the main reason why people feel less active in working.

Also

, to reduce the stress from

office

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the office

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, the

office

owner should provide holiday or free

time

to make their

workers

relieve their mental pain.