In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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In the present day, the majority of co-operations tend to develop their
products
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way
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.Due to the high demand of
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,when they launched their
products
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,they advertise it through the online, TV, Radio etc to attract the buyers.I strongly agree that there is a positive impact.
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with, the majority of people tend to buy
products
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which
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are branded.So that many consumers develop their
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with technology and manage to launch yearly.
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, Apple company launch their
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Evey year with
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development of facilities
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as quality of
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, security of the phone, network generation etc.Even they have competitors like Huawei, Samsung they managed to attract their buyers because of the uniqueness of their
products
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as well as the
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deliver their
products
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to the public.
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, as a reputed
company
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they tarnish their image to launch cheap
products
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.So that according to the many research articles.The company who involves with branded
products
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or customised
products
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.They would not
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loose
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their loyalty from the customers by showing novelty
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images
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of
product
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item
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items
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through advertisement.
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to that,due to the high demand
of
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products
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, companies tend to produce
same
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the same
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product
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.So that co-operations advertise it in a new
way
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to attract certain people.
Eventhough
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,there is a negative impact
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mislead
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the consumers
for
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sell their
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,due to the
ethic
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business strategy,
organisation
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the organisation
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wouldn't broadcast wrong information.
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,when co-operations
involved
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to manufacture
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same
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product
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,there might be an opportunity to discover innovation and creativity.
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can
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to develop the certain
products
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.For an instance,
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the smart
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smart phone
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smartphone
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is the most essential equipment to the majority of people. There
are
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various
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of phones available on market.So that,
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the consumer
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consumer
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consumers
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can decide the
product
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they want to buy. In conclusion,I believe that advertising is a positive development for companies who need to sell their
products
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in
novelty
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a novelty
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way
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.
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,It gives new opportunities to gain business goals
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as creativeness, discover new
products
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to satisfy consumers' needs.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • emphasise
  • advertising
  • products
  • innovation
  • competitive strategy
  • consumer dissatisfaction
  • value
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