celebrities are famous by glamour more than hardwork. to waht extent do you agree ?

To some extent, I accede with

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verbalization that the leading personality of the country should endeavour to be well-kenned by their denomination and fame rather than their strenuous exertion or deeds. And It leads on illusory paths to youth. Albeit they must have set a good example for society. To commence with, people can consider myriad types of celebrities

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as musicians, sportspersons, actors and so on. Albeit the notion of society is that they only endeavour to replicate their outer comeliness and habiliments but they could not find the distinction between reel or genuine. In fact, they have been the blind adherents of their fashion and opulence so they can take themselves to the gate of heaven through the path of deception. Even though, a man who is intoxicated by the glamour often waste his mazuma and became a victim of debt.

However

, celebrities who are prominent but their achievement are adorable for us.

For example

, M.S.Dhoni who was the face of the Indian cricket team is famous for his strenuous exertion. His life edifies us an edification about being cool and calm and with the avail of

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patience children can get prosperity. We can follow them. Through

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one can understand what is the paramountcy of dedication, how to surmount difficulties. Determinately, yet importantly, fame should not be the past of life or not required to be imitated so everyone should have to be conscious about cognizance and through

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. According to my,

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is the authentic meaning of celebrities who achieve their goals with strenuous exertion.