Some people say History is one of the most important school subject. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, there is a big
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between two ideas. Some
people
whose
intrested
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interested
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education
support that
History
is
most
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the most
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needed lecturer in school. Others believe
Science
and
Technology
are more important than
History
. In my
opninon
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opinion
,
Science
and
Technology
have more effect on
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system and global future. On the one hand,
education
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History
shows some reality that happened in the past but
this
reality has affected
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the present
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.
Goverments
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Governments
Government
or managers could decide with past events and they can see when they will decide for
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future come
.
For instance
, some persons can be curious about their ancestors and what their ancestors did when they fought with another country or enemy and
people
learn a lesson from
this
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competition
.
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is like a mirror that
like
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a bridge between past and future.
By contrast
with these reasons are not demonstrate that
History
is
most
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the most
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important issue in
education
.
On the other hand
,
last
two centuries,
Technology
and
Science
have been in
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era which
it
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will continue to
increasing
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. If you take a look
your
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routine life, you should see a lot of
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parts
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from
tecnological
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technological
devices.
For example
, most
people
use
mobile
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a mobile
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phone
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phones
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that they spend minimum
three-for
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hours in their daily time and it's just in
initial
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time so,
Technology
and
Science
will continue to involve and engage
to
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our big part of
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living
.
Furthermore
, they have
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role in countries development carriers that have to relative with
scientic
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scientific
and technological parts. I think
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this
is
most
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a most
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important thing for
progress
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the progress
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of the humanity and the world. In conclusion, ı understand that why
people
care and spend time with
History
which has
benificial
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beneficial
information inside, but these
cause
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don't prove that
History
most important lecture our
education
system.
Technology
and
Science
have more
effect
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affect
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our
education
and finance field.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • subject
  • important
  • view
  • understand
  • past
  • critical thinking
  • analysis
  • innovation
  • progress
  • practical
  • balance
  • opinion
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