Some people say History is one of the most important school subject. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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interested

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education

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support that

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needed lecturer in school. Others believe

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and

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are more important than

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. In my

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opinion

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and

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have more effect on

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education

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system and global future. On the one hand,

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shows some reality that happened in the past but

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reality has affected

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Goverments

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Governments

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or managers could decide with past events and they can see when they will decide for

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future come

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, some persons can be curious about their ancestors and what their ancestors did when they fought with another country or enemy and

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learn a lesson from

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is like a mirror that

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a bridge between past and future.

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with these reasons are not demonstrate that

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most

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important issue in

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last

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two centuries,

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and

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have been in

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era which

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will continue to

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. If you take a look

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routine life, you should see a lot of

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from

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technological

devices.

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use

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phone

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that they spend minimum

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hours in their daily time and it's just in

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time so,

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and

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will continue to involve and engage

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our big part of

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living

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, they have

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role in countries development carriers that have to relative with

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scientific

and technological parts. I think

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this

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important thing for

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of the humanity and the world. In conclusion, ı understand that why

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care and spend time with

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which has

benificial

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beneficial

information inside, but these

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don't prove that

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most important lecture our

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system.

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and

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have more

effect

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affect

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our

education

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and finance field.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

301 words

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Some people say History is one of the most important school subject. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In some countries, more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this question?

Some people argue that exams put too much pressure on university students, but others think that dealing with pressure is an essential skill to develop before people begin employment. Discuss both sides of the argument and present your opinion.

The media has become too influential in peoples lives today and this is a negative development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.