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TASK 2: The range of technology available to people is increasing the gap between the rich and the poor. Others think it has an opposite effect. Discuss both views and give your opinions.

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In
this
 21st century , modern
technology
 has lept the way into every sphere of human life where some
people
 reckon that
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 the range of
technology
 available to
people
is rise
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 the gap between the wealthy and poor persons but others think that it has
reverse
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a reverse
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 effect which I will
disscuss
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discuss
 in my upcoming paragraphs. To address with, poor persons get
education
 easily with the development of
technology
 because the internet provides a plethora of
education
 websites and applications in
thefree
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the free
 of cost where poor students can easily get more knowledge about the particular field of
education
for instance
 , according to
recent
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 survey,
nowdays
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,
mosty
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most
mostly
people
 use
internet
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 just to know about their
education
 in the free of cost
secondly
, after the invention of mobile
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phones
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 and computers rural areas are becoming part of the global
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village
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 and they can communicate all over the world with the advancement of
technology
as a result
 , it is very beneficial for
people
 life.
However
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 on the other side , some
people
 think that
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 rich have more beneficial to have modern science
firstly
, wealthy
people
's have gotten the most effective treatments of disease with the help of modern types of
machinary
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machinery
 there are many diseases like
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cancer, heart transplants and many more which are very expensive to treat by advanced medical
machineries
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machinery
types of machinery
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 it can only afford for wealthy
people
inspite
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in spite
 of
this
, more luxurious goods produced by different companies because rich persons have more choices of buying those items. I believe that
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 modern science improved the lifestyles of both the personalities in my opinion recent
technology
 has increased the gap between rich and poor.
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