Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with organised and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this?

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Many
people
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perfer
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prefer
to keep the
house
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and office clean and put all stuff in order, which is
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a
well
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organisation for everybody. I believe is it a good idea to make sure our
workpalce
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workplace
and living area nice and tidy, as good organisation
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very important for
people
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live
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.
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, a clean workshop can make
others
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people
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feel
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fell
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feel
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better
,
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when they
are work
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in that area because everyone
perfer
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prefer
to have a nice and clean working
enviroment
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environment
.
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Also
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all tools should
put
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in place which
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activity can make
other
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workmates to easy to find the tools.
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, in an
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if someone
leave
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rubbish everywhere,
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can make a terrible smell in the office and make the air dirty.
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,
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house
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the house
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should
be keep
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keep
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it clean and ensure everything
in
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is in
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places
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place
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, so that, other family members can live in
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cosy home.
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, a husband always
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his dirty clothes on the couch and his wife do not have time to clean up for him. If one day a visitor
come
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into the
house
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, when they see the clothes everywhere and they have no place to sit, so
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could make the owner feel embarrassed.
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, if they have
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kids,
they
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the
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children will learn the bad habit as well. In summary, I strongly believe a workplace and a
house
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should keep in clean and tidy, which everybody can work or live in a good
enviroment
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environment
.
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, a workshop
have
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all the tools if
people
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leave
verything
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everything
out of place, so others cannot find it,
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could make an
arguement
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argument
or cause
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incident
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • organised
  • clutter-free
  • productivity
  • mental clarity
  • efficiency
  • professionalism
  • first impressions
  • ergonomics
  • aesthetically pleasing
  • compulsive neatness
  • functional space
  • minimising distractions
  • systematic arrangement
  • time management
  • work-life balance
  • streamline
  • feng shui
  • optimal performance
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