Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with organised and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this?
Many
people
perfer
to keep the Correct your spelling
prefer
house
and office clean and put all stuff in order, which is it
a Correct pronoun usage
apply
well
organisation for everybody. I believe is it a good idea to make sure our Change the adverb
good
workpalce
and living area nice and tidy, as good organisation Correct your spelling
workplace
is
very important for Change the verb form
are
people
live
.
Add the particle
to live
As a result
, a clean workshop can make others
Correct quantifier usage
other
people
Correct your spelling
feel
fell
betterCorrect your spelling
feel
,
when they Remove the comma
apply
are work
in that area because everyone Change the verb form
are working
perfer
to have a nice and clean working Correct your spelling
prefer
enviroment
. Correct your spelling
environment
Also
all tools should Add a comma
,Also
put
in place which Add a missing verb
be put
this
activity can make other
workmates to easy to find the tools. Correct pronoun usage
it other
For instance
, in an office
if someone Add a comma
,office
leave
rubbish everywhere, Change the verb form
leaves
this
can make a terrible smell in the office and make the air dirty. Furthermore
, house
should Add an article
the house
be keep
it clean and ensure everything Change the verb form
keep
in
Add a missing verb
is in
places
, so that, other family members can live in Fix the agreement mistake
place
the
cosy home. Correct article usage
a
For example
, a husband always leave
his dirty clothes on the couch and his wife do not have time to clean up for him. If one day a visitor Change the verb form
leaves
come
into the Change the verb form
comes
house
, when they see the clothes everywhere and they have no place to sit, so this
could make the owner feel embarrassed. Also
, if they have a
kids, Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
they
children will learn the bad habit as well.
In summary, I strongly believe a workplace and a Correct your spelling
the
house
should keep in clean and tidy, which everybody can work or live in a good enviroment
. Correct your spelling
environment
In addition
, a workshop have
all the tools if Change the verb form
has
people
leave verything
out of place, so others cannot find it, Correct your spelling
everything
this
could make an arguement
or cause Correct your spelling
argument
Correct your spelling
incident
accidents
inccident
.Correct article usage
an inccident
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