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During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter - remind him when and where you met - tell him what kind of job you are interested in -say why you think you would be suitable for the job

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Dear Sir,
This
 is Jeevitha Sachithanantham, I'm writing to you in response to our conversation during our journey from Chennai to Dubai in Jet Airways on the 24th December 2021. During our conversation, I had informed about my interest in the food industry. We were discussing the various job opportunities to earn a handsome income, especially in food departments. I'm more interested to work as a Foodservice Supervisor and I had recently graduated in Food and safety.
Furthermore
, I worked as a chef in various multi-cuisine establishments for over nine years. I believe that you had committed me to an employment opportunity in one of your establishments.
Moreover
, I think that I have all the relevant skills and experiences to work as a Foodservice Supervisor. I would like to
further
 discuss
this
 opportunity so please reach out to me by phone or by email at your convenience time. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Jeevi.S
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

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