You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter • explain why you want to take time off work • give details of the amount of time you need • suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

Dear Mr Macri, I hope

this

letter finds you well. I am writing

this

letter to request some annual leave off. I have been decided to go back to my country to visit my parents, as I have not been able to see them for 2 years. Due to the covid-19 pandemic restriction, all countries broader was shut.

Finally

, now the government agree to reopen the international flights.

Therefore

, I am requesting to start my holidays on 20 Jan 2022 till 30 Jan 2022. I know now is the busy season on the farm but I have no choice

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because my dad hopes that I can go back home to celebrate Chinese New Year with them.

Although

, I am on leave and I am in the country but I will keep in contact with Ben to ensure all the jobs will be finished on time.

Also

, I can use video calls to look at the jobs to make sure all young vines have the full-arm roll on the wires. I hope that you can approve my time off, and I promise to you, I will not turn off my phone, so you or Ben can call me at any time. I look forward to hearing from you. Thank you Kinds regards June

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
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1Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

212 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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Topic Vocabulary:

Respectful greeting (e.g., 'Dear [Manager's name],')
Time off, absence, leave of absence
Personal circumstances, compelling reason
Duration, number of days/weeks
Cover duties, delegate tasks, work handover
Alternative arrangements, contingency plans
Preparation, advance work, assistance
Gratitude, appreciate, understanding
Inconvenience, minimal disruption
Request approval, formally request

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