You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

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Dear sir/madam I am one of your current students on your course of introduction to coding. I am afraid that I have to withdrawal from it due to my personal issue. I am writing

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letter to let you know.

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, I have no means to express any dissatisfaction regarding your teaching, in fact, I enjoy the class atmosphere and style of demonstrating, which turns tedious principles into interesting skills.

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, I always ego to expand my personal skills, especially computer skills, which are considered to be useful in my job.

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, I recently was assigned a manager position in another city by a company,

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I really want to remain in

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class, I will not able to present the rest of the sessions. Hope you could understand my situation, and let me know whether could I get a partial refund when I withdrawal from the class. Please let me know. Yours faithfully, Jason

jasonzeroshiThu Dec 30 2021

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

156 words

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