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Band 5

contemporary era, human-kind use the internet to search the knowledge

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this
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 contemporary era, humankind
use
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 the
internet
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 to
search
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 the knowledge about what they want to learn.
This
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 trend is being followed by nearly the whole population around the globe.
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, some
people
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 argue that all the things uploaded on the
internet
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 are not genuine. I believe that the reliability of news on the net depends on the location of the sources from
they
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 are being released. In
this
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 essay, I will focus my discussion on
people
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’s skills for surfing the computers and the sources from where they acquire
information
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. To commence with
people
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 who are
skillful
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 at surfing
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internet
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the internet
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.
It
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claim
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claims
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 that websites and social media are
dependable
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source
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sources
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 of education.
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,
the
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apply
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tech savvy
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people
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 always admire
the
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apply
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web technology and
it's
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 efficiency for supplying genuine
information
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 instantly. They recommend their friends and family members
to
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apply
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utilize modern technology to access the reports they want to read.
This
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 informs that
a
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skill to
search
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 correct
information
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 using computers can provide humans
the
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with the
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 desired and real
information
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 instantly.
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,
people
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 who have limited ability to use
search
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engine
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 cannot reach the original
source
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 of
information
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. A study revealed that
majority
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the majority
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 of
population
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the population
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 who lack
skills
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the skills
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 to explore articles on the web
complain
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 that the articles available online are not the best
source
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 of
information
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. They argue
this
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 because they reach only to undesired pages when they surf the
information
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in
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on
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internet
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the internet
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.
Thus
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, the incapability to surf and reach
original
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the original
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source
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 of education have
people
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 believe that the informative articles on the
internet
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 are not useful. To conclude, the
skilfulness
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skill
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 to utilize
search
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engine
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engines
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 and
ability
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the ability
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 to reach
original
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an original
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source
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 of
information
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 leaves
impression
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an impression
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 to
people
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 whether the knowledgeable things that are uploaded on the online platform are reliable or not. Since all the
information
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 online
are
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 not true, we need to develop
command
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a command
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 to use the
internet
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 to receive correct knowledge.

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